INVADING, INFECTING ORGANISMS.
-Clean up image, remove smaller cracks from the word invading which aren't visible until scaled up to A1.
-What stock am I going to use when it comes to print, should The image be separated into just 2 layers and screen printed?
-Add some sort of manipulation to the word organism, so that each word has a different modification.
TO THE MOON AND BACK.
-Placement of words, does it read how you want it to be read? Try switiching the words around so it can be easily read.
-Perspective works well with the singular lines however a different layout could work much better.
-Consider stock, will it be screen printed/digitally printed?
YOUR RELATIONSHIP WILL SOON BE OVER.
-Image is a bit bland, the whiteness of the background ruins its overall effect.
-Stock considerations, an off-white background would work so much better than the plainness of the stock it is printed on currently.
-Experiment further with the placement of the words on the page, having them centered could be a possibility, or arranged so that more of the letters are back to front/upside down.