Today I spoke to john and took along some print outs of my buisness cards to get some feedback on they're appearance and impact coming from an industrial point of view. Overall the feedback was good but they're are a few things I still need to amend. The kerning on some of the letters within my contact details is too tight and some of the boundaries need connecting. One idea which I was really fond of was producing a business card that has my name wrapping around the front and back so it reads I am will rather than will I am. Some of the notes I made are below.